Ahh, what a beautiful sunny day. I woke up and made some breakfast until a big noise from outside and I saw one of the biggest turtles. I was shocked but then in my head, I was like this is fun. But I was acting dumb so i was some waves coming out of him my dad came out to see what was going on I felt some grass on him but i thought it was weird
My dad tried calling the cops but he realized we were far away from town we were stuck
I saw some birds flying away to their nest I was really really scared but I smelt something really weird it was THE STOVE!!!!!!.Me and dad quickly ran to the kitchen but….. The weird thing was that THE OVEN WAS NOT ONN. WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT. So after that, me and dad took a nap and…….. I think I was moving but I went to go check and the WHOLE HOUSE WAS MOVING.
Smell
Fresh air
Breakfast burning
Taste
Hear
Giant footsteps
Yelling
Feel
Grass
Giant turtle
See
Birds
trees
Kia ora Adoration.
ReplyDeleteI think the idea you had for this piece of writing is really cool. Maybe next time, read through it to make sure it makes sense all the way through for your audience. I wonder also if you could add some visuals to your posts.